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EnglandxReader- Swingset
I just came up with this, I know it's not very good, it's my first reader insert so please give me some critique!
--Your POV--
It was a cool Autumn evening, and you were hanging out at the park. Alone of course. All your friends thought playgrounds were too baby-ish ad a waste of time. But you didn't care. You sort of like to be alone, and you didn't think it mattered what other people thought.
You walk over to the swingset. Brushing some water and leaves off the seat, you sit down and start to swing. You love the sensation of swinging, just the feelig of your [h/c] hair flying wildly through the wind. It feels like you're flying. You close your [e/c] eyes and swing as high as you can go.
--Iggy's POV--
I was walking home from my brother Alfred's house after he asked me to come over and help with his homework. I'm an exchange student from Britain, but my brother's from America, and he's pure American.
"Bloody Hell." I thought. It was bloody fractions, you'd think he could handle it!
"Hello Arthur!" I hear an adorable little voice.
"Flying Mint Bunny!" Mint Bunny is one of my best friends, but everyone thinks I'm crazy. No one can see him except me and... Oh! That's right. That girl[Name] can see him as well.
[Name] understands me a lot more than all the other bloody wankers I know, so of course she could see him. She also likes my scones.
"You know who I've been wanting to see lately?" Mint Bunny chirped.
"Who?" I ask, still a little lost in thought.
"[Name].." Mint Bunny smirks as I blush. "You were thinking about her too, weren't you."
Before I could answer I hear a voice.
"Hey Arthur!"
--Your POV--
"Hmm? Oh, hello [name]!" The blonde Englishman walking on the sidewalk in front of the park waved. You saw Flying Mint Bunny there as well. "I was just thinking about you" he says, making you flush a tiny bit. He walks over and puts the bags he's carrying on the parkbench. "Aren't you a little too old for swinging?" He chuckles a bit as he watches your [h/c] hair fly all over the place as you swing back and forth.
"No!" You laugh, closing your eyes again.
Lost in thought again as you swung, you didn't realise you had let go of the chains.
"[NAAAAAAAAAMMEEE]!!!!" You hear Arthur and Mint Bunny's voices shriek your name as you feel the seat give way.
"Oh crap!" You fly through the air. "Houston, we have a pr-"
You land on Arthur, who was panicking, trying to catch you. You tumble through the grass and land with a splat in the muddy patch next to a large maple tree.
--England's POV--
"uugh.. What the-" I groan as I lift my face out of the mud. [name] was laying on my back, as she had just flew off her swing and landed us both in the mud.
"Oh, my, god, Arthur?"
"Yea?" I turn my head trying to see her.
"Are you okay, because that was fun." She snickers.
"what's so funny?"
"You're covered in mud!"
"Yeah? well so are you!" I snap, pushing her off my back and scooting over to the large maple tree nearby.
--Your POV--
You picked yourself up out of the mud and smirked at Arthur. He tried to scowl, but it ended with him just chuckling lightly. You step over and lean against his shoulder, making him blush. "Are you mad at me?" You say to him.
He sighed. "No, you're too super cute for me to stay mad at you. I'm just glad you're okay." You look up at him. You watched his face turn pink as he realized what he said.
"Arthur?"
"huh." He grunts. You lean against him and he puts his arm around your shoulders. Then unexpectedly, kisses the top of your head. Surprised, you look up at him, only to see his face screwed up in a strange expression. He spat on the ground next to him.
"blah! You taste like mud!" He bonks you on the forehead lightly.
"hmmm.."You snuggle close to him. "I love you Iggy."
He brushes some of your [h/c] hair away from your face and closes his eyes, leaning against the Maple tree.
"I love you too [name]..."
I just came up with this, I know it's not very good, it's my first reader insert so please give me some critique!
--Your POV--
It was a cool Autumn evening, and you were hanging out at the park. Alone of course. All your friends thought playgrounds were too baby-ish ad a waste of time. But you didn't care. You sort of like to be alone, and you didn't think it mattered what other people thought.
You walk over to the swingset. Brushing some water and leaves off the seat, you sit down and start to swing. You love the sensation of swinging, just the feelig of your [h/c] hair flying wildly through the wind. It feels like you're flying. You close your [e/c] eyes and swing as high as you can go.
--Iggy's POV--
I was walking home from my brother Alfred's house after he asked me to come over and help with his homework. I'm an exchange student from Britain, but my brother's from America, and he's pure American.
"Bloody Hell." I thought. It was bloody fractions, you'd think he could handle it!
"Hello Arthur!" I hear an adorable little voice.
"Flying Mint Bunny!" Mint Bunny is one of my best friends, but everyone thinks I'm crazy. No one can see him except me and... Oh! That's right. That girl[Name] can see him as well.
[Name] understands me a lot more than all the other bloody wankers I know, so of course she could see him. She also likes my scones.
"You know who I've been wanting to see lately?" Mint Bunny chirped.
"Who?" I ask, still a little lost in thought.
"[Name].." Mint Bunny smirks as I blush. "You were thinking about her too, weren't you."
Before I could answer I hear a voice.
"Hey Arthur!"
--Your POV--
"Hmm? Oh, hello [name]!" The blonde Englishman walking on the sidewalk in front of the park waved. You saw Flying Mint Bunny there as well. "I was just thinking about you" he says, making you flush a tiny bit. He walks over and puts the bags he's carrying on the parkbench. "Aren't you a little too old for swinging?" He chuckles a bit as he watches your [h/c] hair fly all over the place as you swing back and forth.
"No!" You laugh, closing your eyes again.
Lost in thought again as you swung, you didn't realise you had let go of the chains.
"[NAAAAAAAAAMMEEE]!!!!" You hear Arthur and Mint Bunny's voices shriek your name as you feel the seat give way.
"Oh crap!" You fly through the air. "Houston, we have a pr-"
You land on Arthur, who was panicking, trying to catch you. You tumble through the grass and land with a splat in the muddy patch next to a large maple tree.
--England's POV--
"uugh.. What the-" I groan as I lift my face out of the mud. [name] was laying on my back, as she had just flew off her swing and landed us both in the mud.
"Oh, my, god, Arthur?"
"Yea?" I turn my head trying to see her.
"Are you okay, because that was fun." She snickers.
"what's so funny?"
"You're covered in mud!"
"Yeah? well so are you!" I snap, pushing her off my back and scooting over to the large maple tree nearby.
--Your POV--
You picked yourself up out of the mud and smirked at Arthur. He tried to scowl, but it ended with him just chuckling lightly. You step over and lean against his shoulder, making him blush. "Are you mad at me?" You say to him.
He sighed. "No, you're too super cute for me to stay mad at you. I'm just glad you're okay." You look up at him. You watched his face turn pink as he realized what he said.
"Arthur?"
"huh." He grunts. You lean against him and he puts his arm around your shoulders. Then unexpectedly, kisses the top of your head. Surprised, you look up at him, only to see his face screwed up in a strange expression. He spat on the ground next to him.
"blah! You taste like mud!" He bonks you on the forehead lightly.
"hmmm.."You snuggle close to him. "I love you Iggy."
He brushes some of your [h/c] hair away from your face and closes his eyes, leaning against the Maple tree.
"I love you too [name]..."
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So sorry for cheesy British fluff!
This is sort of a gift for my cousin ~TazzyGal, Hope you liek.
I'm so sorry if England is OOC, I really just randomly came up with this!
Story belongs to Me.
Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya.
You belong to England.
PLEASE CRITIQUE!
This is sort of a gift for my cousin ~TazzyGal, Hope you liek.
I'm so sorry if England is OOC, I really just randomly came up with this!
Story belongs to Me.
Hetalia belongs to Hidekaz Himaruya.
You belong to England.
PLEASE CRITIQUE!
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I thought it was good for your first time! I think you should mind your spelling and grammer and every time the speaker changes it has to be a new paragraph!
EX.
"Hi, bestie!" Alison ran over to Jordan and sat down next to her. "What are you doing?"
Jordan looked down at the paper. "Stupid homework!:
EX. over
Overall I thought it was great! It was very good and cute! I like your reader inserts! Write more please! please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please!